1. Use the present
tense as the principal tense for your essay (unless you are narrating
a story that
took place in the past). Although you may need to use other
tenses from
time to time, when your main tense is the present you will avoid many complications.
This is the normal convention for essay writing in English too.
2. Consult the
list of expressions on page 17 of your textbook (Ensemble) for some
useful
essay vocabulary, especially transition (linking) words.
3. Do not
begin a sentence with "aussi" meaning "also"; place it after
the verb.
Certains féministes pensent aussi
que le mariage exploite les femmes.
Or you can introduce an additional idea with "de plus" (in addition):
De plus, certains féministes pensent que le mariage exploite les femmes.
4. Do not
begin a sentence with "parce que"; "parce que" is a co-ordinating conjunction.
To co-ordinate two main clauses, it must be placed between them:
Les jeunes et les adultes ont des idées
différentes parce qu'ils mènent des vies
différentes.
At the beginning of a sentence, use "puisque" which means "since":
Puisqu'ils ne sont pas encore dans la vie active, les jeunes sont idéalistes.
5. Do not start a sentence with "peut-être"; place it after the verb:
Le mariage limite peut-être la liberté de l'individu, mais.....
It is acceptable to begin a sentence with "peut-être" if you add "que" after it:
Peut-être que le mariage limite la liberté de l'individu, mais....
6. Use the subject
"on" with a verb in the third person singular when you are referring to
a body of
opinion, a widely-held belief etc. "On" is the equivalent of the
English
terms "one",
"people", "people in general", "they", "it is said, thought etc.".
Do not use
the pronoun
"ils" in this context. "Ils" must always refer to some specific,
previously
mentioned group:
Les jeunes sont idéalistes. Ils veulent réformer la société.
On pense (people think, they think,
it is thought) que les jeunes sont idéalistes
parce qu'ils ont peu d'expérience de la vie.
7. When the word
"to" in English has the sense of "in order to", you need "pour" before
the infinitive in French, not just the infinitive itself:
Il faut travailler pour réussir.
It is necessary to work (in order) to succeed.
8. The infinitive can be used with other prepositions:
Avant de quitter leur famille, les jeunes sont parfois nerveux.
Before leaving their family, young people are sometimes nervous.
9. The infinitive can also be used with the impersonal expression "il est + adjectif + de":
Il est important de comprendre que..............
Il est intéressant de savoir que..........
Il n'est pas facile de recommencer une vie........
n.b. In your written work, you should use "il est" and not "c'est"
in this construction.
"C'est" is frequently used in this type of sentence in the spoken language
but
should be avoided in written French.
10.
If you are using a double
verb construction (i.e. a conjugated verb completed by an
infinitive as in "nous voulons partir"), remember to check whether or not
you need a
preposition before the infinitive. Some verbs take "à" or
"de" before the infinitive;
others take no preposition:
J'espère me marier un jour, mais pas trop tôt. (no preposition)
Beaucoup de gens commencent à mettre en cause le mariage. (use "à")
Les jeunes essaient de comprendre les adultes. (use "de")
See pages 280-281 of Ensemble for a
comprehensive list of verbs and the
preposition they take when completed by an infinitive.