Look at your list of ideas critically and decide which ones you
really want to use. Eliminate anything that is irrelevant or trivial;
add secondary ideas to the points which now seem important to you.
Which ideas could be main points in a discussion? Which ideas might
be good for opening or closing your essay? What order should you
place them in for your essay to be coherent and have maximum effect?
On a fresh sheet of paper, organize this material into an outline for your
essay. Remember
Aristotle's advice! He said that a well-constructed
plot should have a beginning, a middle and an end. So should your
essay. (If you want to see exactly
what Aristotle said about this, click here
).
Now tackle each part of your plan separately. For each part, brainstorm
the French words and expressions that you might need or be able
to use. Start with vocabulary you already know; consult the
vocabulary presented in the textbook (if appropriate to your topic).
Only use a dictionary if you cannot find a way to express your idea within
your existing vocabulary. It is always better to work with what you
know. On the other hand, searching for vocabulary will often
suggest additional ideas for your essay. If you use a dictionary,
make sure that you read the dictionary entry carefully and pick the right
term for your context.
Once you have your plan and a list of vocabulary, you are ready to write
the essay. Remember to simplify complex ideas (and sentences)
and break them down into smaller, more straightforward units.
Probably, you do not yet have all the means to express in French what you
would really like to, so for the time being, allow yourself to be guided,
in part, by what you are able to say clearly and correctly.
And remember, there is always more than one way to say the same
thing. If
you are having real difficulty expressing something, perhaps the problem
is not your French; perhaps the thought itself is not yet sufficiently
clear in your mind. As a well-known French writer once said:
Ce que l'on conçoit bien s'énonce clairement,
Et les mots pour le dire arrivent aisément.
(Boileau, L'Art poétique)
When you have completed your first draft, re-read your work carefully
and check the French in a systematic way. Look at each verb
ending to make sure it matches the subject; identify the adjectives and
check that they agree with the noun they qualify; have you added
's' or the appropriate plural ending to nouns preceeded by 'les', 'ses',
'nos' etc.? Have you used the appropriate form of the possessive
adjective? Do you find the same word occurring lots of times? Can
you replace some of these repetitions with other words? If you have
any hesitation about the gender of a word, check it in a glossary or dictionary.
It is considered a serious error to get the gender of a common word
(e.g. maison, livre, chien, école, mariage) wrong in your
written work.
Make the necessary corrections to your work and then type it up or write
it out afresh. Please double-space your essay - this
makes it much easier to read and leaves adequate space for comments or
suggestions.
For language tips, click here.
For
a brief outline of the evaluation criteria, click
here.
It
is a wonderful thing to be able to express your thoughts and ideas in another
language and so share them with others! Try to enjoy the challenge!
I certainly enjoy reading what my students write.